OT Writing.

[Fiona]

Okay, I like to write. And I have a few bits and bobs I might post up here for anyone who's bored and needs a read of something. But they're not fanfics, so I thought I'd make an OT topic.

[shayneissexi]

ive wrote 7 pages of a book if thast any good ? llf

[Fiona]

If you need anyone to read it, stick it on the forum and I'll give you my opinion. ;D

[shayneissexi]

its gonna be quite long so im sorry
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Under The Sun

Chapter 1

As a young couple Jennifer and Matt were lovestruck, they had their whole lives ahead of them. He was Tall, Tan, Slim, and he had Dark short and spiky hair and Jennifer was Tall, Tan, Slim, and had waist length blonde hair with blue eyes, and she had a famine but sexy dress style. Nothing could come between them they had been together for 2 years and both lived a decent from each other when going out together; they had also planned for to move in together. All of this came to nothing after Matt left Jennifer, leaving for no reason and had no means of contact with him. She was devastated, and every morning since then she wakes up hoping that he would be there, but she is always left in disappointment as he is never there lying beside her and loving her. Jennifer who is in her early twenties woke up with the same feeling that she woke up with every morning before going to work. The feeling of Loneliness. She had felt lonely since that long distance day of her first love getting up and leaving. Although it happened a few years ago, she still has the long and lonely feeling of heartbreak and wanting him to come back to her. Although deep in her heart, she knew that this would not happen. Matt was Jennifer’s dream guy and her first love. Jennifer just wishes that she could even see him or hear from him to see how he was getting on without her. She often wondered if Matt ever thought of her and if he had any regrets of walking out on her without giving her an explanation.

Every day that loneliness feeling stayed with her deep down even thought she did not show it, she always stayed happy and cheerful for her friends, but when alone, Jennifer graved on the idea of never seeing or hearing from Matt again, she always would lie and cast her mind back to all the happy times in which they shared. It was almost Christmas, and this hurt her as they had always spent Christmas together, the other days which hurt her throughout the year was days like, Matt’s Birthday, as he would get the day off work for to spend it with her, and also New Year’s Eve, the reason for New Year’s Eve was she missed that New Year’s kiss at 12.00, and for the past two years she had missed this. So she did not see how this year would be much different.

After thinking of the spent the same amount of time thinking about the same things that she does every morning, Jennifer got up at the her normal time, early in the morning to go to work. She worked as a receptionist in the top lawyer’s office in England. So her job was the best job in her opinion that she could ever dream off. Jennifer was a tall, slim and extremely good looking girl with waist length blonde hair, and blue eyes. Her dress sense was very feminine although sexy looking also. It was another hard day at the office, all the typing reports, photocopying information for the lawyer. All the normal things which you do within in the office of a top lawyer. When in work, Jennifer never felt as lonely as she was not on her own, but it was still inside her and she always thought about it. She also talked to her best friend Jamie-Lee, who had helped her though when Matt had left her, Jamie-Lee has stayed with Jennifer at her home for at least a week for to try and get her to calm down and realize that it was not her fault that Matt had left. Jennifer sat nearly every day talking to Jamie-Lee at break and lunch talking about what Matt done on her and how she is feeling.

Then on one Thursday afternoon at lunch time, Jamie-Lee said to Jennifer ‘It is time that you try and get over Matt, I will set you up on a date with my good friend Paul, he is really interesting and is really sweet and caring towards women who have been hurt in the past’ Jennifer replies ‘ It is not that easy to get over Matt, I still think about him every day, but if you think it is worth a try, then I will try it. Afterall you are my best friend and only want the best for me’. After she hears this from Jamie-Lee, her other friend Jacqueline said to her ‘That’s a really good idea, you should really see how it goes and if it does not work out, you can always say that you tried to move on’.

So after lunch was over Jamie-Lee got in contact with her friend Paul, and she gave him Jennifer’s mobile number. After Jamie-Lee got off the phone to Paul, Jennifer’s mobile rang, and she answered it and walked over to Jamie-Lee, and started talking to Paul and she accepted to go out with him. They said good-bye and then Jamie-Lee asked what was said. Jennifer sat and told Jamie-Lee everything and that she had to meet Paul at the Italian restaurant Italian Inn at 7.00 pm on Saturday. The rest of that day, Jamie-Lee sat sending messages to Jennifer asking things like, ‘What are you going to wear’ Jennifer sent one back saying ‘I’m not to sure, maybe you could come round and help me out since you know him’. So it was sorted, on Saturday Jamie-Lee and Jacqueline where going around to Jennifer’s house for to help her get ready for the big night out. All Friday Jennifer, Jacqueline and Jamie-Lee sat talking as much as possible about what the date on Saturday would be like and also things to talk about. Jennifer decided that she was just going to be herself on this date, and talk about herself if Paul asked her, other than that she was going to listen to everything about him and remember it. On Friday night Jennifer went home and lay thinking about Matt, and how she could have still been with him, and not going on this date tomorrow night. But she then thought that it was his fault that she was in the position and that she would go out and enjoy herself for once.

[shayneissexi]

Chapter 2

On Saturday morning, Jamie-Lee called Jennifer and asked her if she was ready for her big date. They sat talking for a while about it then Jennifer asked Jamie-Lee to call Jacqueline and if they would come around to her and help her to start getting sorted for the big date that night. Jennifer got out of bed and went for a shower while waiting for Jamie-Lee and Jacqueline coming around for to help her. When she got out of the shower she got dressed in her jogging bottom’s and her halter neck sports top, as she would be in and out of clothes all day for to decide what to wear to the restaurant tonight. It was nearly Christmas, so she wanted to look nice for her date but she also wanted to be warm, just in case Paul took her for a walk in the park after dinner for a walk and a talk. At 2.00 pm Jamie-Lee and Jacqueline knocked on Jennifer’s door, and they could see that she was very nervous about tonight.

So they came in and sat down, and Jennifer put the kettle on, they sat talking about what style that Jennifer would like to wear that night, Jennifer said ‘Something sexy and feminine but also warm’. They all laughed at this. Then after they went to Jennifer’s clothes cupboard and her shows cupboard and they all started looking through her clothes. She tried on various different types of trousers at tops; she even tried on a pin-striped suit at one stage, then skirts – short and long with tops. She tried on sports clothes but she thought that she looked a little to young in those types of clothes. She then tried on her cat-suit, but she thought that it was a little over the type. So she decided to go for a light blue top and a black skirt, which her black and white sandals. The next thing that was on the list was her hair, they spent hours trying out different hairstyles, they tried her hair up in a bun, ponytail, then they tried her hair down, they tried it straight, then wavy and the crimped, they did not like none of them so they straightened her hair again. After they done this, they could not think of anything else to do for her hair so they asked Jennifer which she liked the most and she said ‘I liked it crimped’. So they re-crimped her hair. Then they done her make-up and they tried lots of different shades and tons on Jennifer. They settled with Blue eye shadow and Pink lip-gloss.

By the time 6.30 pm came, Jennifer was just about ready and then Jamie-Lee and Jacqueline sat with her for 15 minutes and then she left for to head to the restaurant. She got there within 10 minutes, and Paul was already there. He was waiting for her outside of the restaurant. As she got out of the taxi, he waited until she walked up to the door and he said ‘Jennifer’ and she said ‘Yes, that’s me’ he said ‘I’m Paul, are you ready to go in?’ she said ‘Yes’ and he took her arm, and placed it upon his arm, as they walked into the restaurant. Jennifer looked at Paul and thought to herself, that he was a very well dressed and well mannered man. He also had a very smart but manly dress sense. She was starting to like him a

The restaurant was a very high quality place in England; it was a tall red brick building, with wide and small windows, which has designs on them. At the front of the restaurant there was a man who opened the door for you as you walked up to him. His name was James, and he was a very friendly person, he wore a red uniform with a company badge on it, a little red top hat, a white shirt with a red and black tie, and a pair of black shoes.

When they got into the restaurant, they where taken to their seats and he pulled out the chair for her to sit down. Once he sat down they started talking, and Jennifer said to him ‘You have very good taste on where to take a lady, and you are also the perfect gentleman, just like Jamie-Lee said you were’. He replied ‘Jamie-Lee is a good friend of mine, and I treat her with the up-most respect.’ Then the waiter came and asked them what they would like to order. Jennifer had Chicken Scarpariello, which was chicken and consists of golden brown pieces of roasted chicken topped with Lemon sauce and Paul had Beef Carpaccio which is Beef, Onion, Mushroom, Beef gravy and carrots.

While waiting on their food to come, they started talking about their past experiences and past lover’s. Jennifer told Paul about Matt, and everything which they had been through, and how they had planned on moving in together, then he got up and left and gave Jennifer no idea about him leaving. She also told Paul, that he had not even tried to contact her, for to let her know why he left, and even if he was fine. Paul did not talk once while Jennifer was talking, as he wanted to show her respect and show that he was listening to her every word. After she had finished speaking he said to her ‘I do not see how anyone could leave someone as lovely as yourself, and if you ask me he is a very foolish man’. This almost brought tears to Jennifer’s eyes and she found herself saying to him ‘Thank-you that is the sweetest thing that anyone has ever said to me’. After this Paul told her about his past relationship with Caitlin he had been with Caitlin 2 years also, and he had broke up with her, because he came home one day from work, with flowers and chocolates for her and found her in bed with his best friend. He then found out that Caitlin and his best friend got married a year after. So he is the same as Jennifer, still trying to get over the loss of someone he loved. After he told Jennifer this she could see that he was very upset by sharing this entire experience, so she said ‘I know who you feel, believe me. But I’m sure we it will fade when we find someone else’. He smiled at her and was about to say something but just as he was about to say it the food came.

During the dinner, Jennifer was thinking to herself about how simpler a situation Paul and herself where in, also about how polite and kind he was to her, and how much she liked him and if he liked her this much as well. Paul was thinking about how much he liked Jennifer and was wondering if she liked him too. They sat quite for a while, then Paul asked Jennifer if she would like some wine, so they got Red wine. They started talking again, and Jennifer said to him ‘so what you into?’ and he replied ‘Football, Basketball, Loads of music and having a good laugh with people I like’. He then said ‘What you into’ and she said ‘I am into Reading, Music, hanging out with friends, and also having a laugh with people I like’. They then both said to each other at the same time, ‘What kind of music are you into’. Paul said ‘Gareth Brooks, Lots of Hip-Hop, R & B and a few slow songs, and Jennifer replied ‘Almost the same as me then, I am into Hip-Hop, Gareth Brooks, R & B, Rap, Pop, Slow Songs, and Rave. So I got a very wide range of favourites’. They both laughed, and then noticed that they had finished there dinner was finished. The waiter then came over to them and asked them if they would like any desert, they both ordered Strawberry Tiramisu. They started talking about concerts coming up, and Paul said ‘Well maybe we could go to one if you like’ and Jennifer said very shyly ‘Yes, that would be extremely nice of you’.

After they finished their deserts Paul, paid the bill, and Jennifer said ‘thank-you Paul that was very nice of you, we will have to do it again sometime’, and Paul replied, ‘It’s not over yet, would you like to go for a walk in the park?’ Jennifer said ‘Yes that would very nice’. So they walked out of the restaurant arm-in-arm.

In the park, the tree’s where rustling, and the leaves where falling and floating off the tree’s. The leaves were Green and Brown, and some where also Red, although it was almost winter, some of the leaves where still firmly placed upon the branches of the tress. Paul said to the Jennifer ‘How did you enjoy dinner’ Jennifer said ‘It was really nice; it’s the best dinner I have had in ages, along with the company’. Paul smiled at her with a shy look in his eyes, and she smiled back and said ‘Sorry if I embarrassed you’, and Paul said ‘No, it is fine. There is something I would like to say to you’. Jennifer said ‘Oh, how strange, so do I.’ Paul said ‘Oh, ok do u mind if I go first?’ She replied with ‘I don’t mind, whatever make you feel comfortable’. He smiled then laughed and said ‘I really like you Jennifer, and if you like me to I’d like to give us a go’.

[shayneissexi]

sorry ive actually only 2 chapters done llf i thought it was more

[shayneissexi]

let me no

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admin said:

Okay, I like to write. And I have a few bits and bobs I might post up here for anyone who's bored and needs a read of something. But they're not fanfics, so I thought I'd make an OT topic.

Oooh gr8 idea Fi
As yoo know i love to write too, but pfft avent been able to for a while - But ive decided to get bck in thee swing of things in thee new year!

So might b able to share some of ma stuff with yoos!

[Fiona]

shayneissexi said:

ive wrote 7 pages of a book if thast any good ? llf

Bless, the storyline is really sweet! Hope Paul and Jennifer last forever. ;D

[shayneissexi]

admin said:

shayneissexi said:

ive wrote 7 pages of a book if thast any good ? llf

Bless, the storyline is really sweet! Hope Paul and Jennifer last forever. ;D

Maybe, or there mite be a twist i aint 2 sure yet thats why i stopped lol , to think